My homework - About my traveling.

The following article is my homework for this week, my new tutor asked me to write a article by using past perfect, I've just and I've already. The words were strikethrough and marked red that have already been amended.(2009/12/18)


About my traveling.

     I had have been to a few countries, the most impressed me the most impressive experience for me was Bali island of Indonesia. It was a tour group for five days. There was totally 11 people joining the group tour, including Lydia and me, and others other members are a big family.

     The first day we arrived, the tour guide had led us to a temple named Tanah Lot that is protecting protects the village people who live near the seaside. You can stand at the highest point and see the beautiful view. The most amazing thing is the temple was built on in the middle of sea, but only male can get closer to it.

     On the second day, we had went boating on a cruise in a the rapids. It was very exciting and also because it was my first time. We had to go down stairs of the mountain cliff. When I saw stairs of the mountain cliff, I'd was already shook shaing like jelly. Because it was very high, however I had to encourage myself to get through over it.

     On the next few days, although we had been to a lot of terrific sightseeing spots, there was still a place that made me unforgetable. It's the Jimbaran beach. I've never see seen such a beautiful beach look like Jimbaran. The sunset made me moved; the waves made me excited! When night came ws coming, we sat on beach and enjoyed our dinner. and A lot of candles was were put on the table, how romantic it was! Unfortunately, I was with my friend but not my boyfriend.

     The nights in Bali island, we went to a bar that was owned by some foreigners. The bar had the exotic atmosphere; a lot of tourists were sitting there and drinking.

     At the end of the travel our trip, we'd already bought a lot of gifts(souvenirs), but my friend and I both didn't want to go home. because Bali island made us relax, and we had a lot of fun in there. Therefore, my friend and I had promised, that we must come here to travel again!